tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6747953262203002812.post7928043543993493753..comments2023-04-02T02:39:29.690-07:00Comments on The Cocoa Series. Begins in 1917 Trinidad, with The Wedding Drums. : COMPETING CHARACTERSMarilyn Rodwellhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03195015482003617317noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6747953262203002812.post-37262718378162253602012-10-11T14:56:07.387-07:002012-10-11T14:56:07.387-07:00It isn't easy Anne, especially if you've g...It isn't easy Anne, especially if you've grown with the character as you've written it. It is then hard to change her personality and behaviour. I have just finished rewriting the first three chapters, so hopefully I have made a start in portraying my Main Character with a stronger personality. We'll see! Marilyn Rodwellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03195015482003617317noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6747953262203002812.post-70754947844459337342012-10-11T11:34:25.001-07:002012-10-11T11:34:25.001-07:00Good post, Marilyn. I have had a similar problem w...Good post, Marilyn. I have had a similar problem with my protagonist in my novel, Save the Last Dance For Me, according to the critiques I have had from NWS. I still haven't decided how I'm going to make her stronger.Anne L Harveyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02669443897089579119noreply@blogger.com