Wednesday, 7 April 2010

7th April 2010

Editing The Match Meeting chapter

Trying hard to shorten this chapter, as it goes on too long about Tara's thoughts and feelings. Not enough action going on... Trying to work out how important this prose is. Came across some amusing bits though, which breaks up the seriousness of the intention for an arranged marriage.

Came across a hole in my plot! Must move a whole chunk to somewhere else. Must go!

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